Sunday, September 14, 2008

Accursed Friend-


That we share our fleas
as old dogs is quite enough_
you may keep your worms.

2 comments:

June Saville said...

Hi Steve
I came to your blog when you linked to mine as a follower. Thank you.
May I say I love this little poem - haiku? I never know how many letters and lines there should be to make them official ...
Also loved the intro to 'Cast in Iron' - 'She brought the pan down on his head with a hard crack, so he died trying to steal the onions.' Honestly!
You certainly aren't afraid to tackle different styles and subjects. Good on you.
'Smell the Coffee' is delicious.
Have you ever thought about doing a creative writing course?
I did just a few years ago at an age when people think you should just stay in a chair and become demented.
Loved it and knocked the socks off the kids a third of my age. It's life's experience that does it.
I'll link to you and drop in now and then ...

Steve said...

Tangaesque/haiku perhaps in an way, short and sweet with something to eat. Yup, that about says it.